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Guest Post: Dyane Forde - Pitching Tips

8/10/2013

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Why do authors need a pitch? Have you tried explaining what your book is about to an agent or publisher, let alone regular people? Most times, authors will stammer something like, “Well, there’s this boy, see? You know, like a teenaged boy, and he has no friends—a real loner, right?—and he meets this girl…” That sound familiar? Before you know it, people’s eyes are glazing over and you’re slack-jawed and embarrassed because you realize you have no idea how to describe your story, worse, how to do it succinctly. Some of you know what I mean. Hey, I know I’ve been there.

Whether it’s to hook an agent or editor, knowing how to ‘pitch’ your story is essential. These people are plied with requests at workshops, and at the office they see tons of queries every day. How will they know your book is better than the rest if your ‘elevator pitch’ (a very short description of your work intended to hook an editor/agent) is generic or your query letter is lost amidst the growing pile on their desk? Right now, the market is flooded with books. No one can predict which one will be a success but you can do everything in your power to make sure that your book gets considered to be published and promoted as ‘the next big thing.’

So what is a pitch? In her post on the subject, paranormal author Jami Gold puts it simply: “…they all perform the job of letting an agent or editor ‘speed date’ through many submissions,” and adds, “Pitches aren’t about selling a manuscript. Their sole purpose is to get to the second date—a request.”

Another very helpful ‘how to’ resource on the subject is The Writer’s Toolkit, where authors Penny Grubb and Danuta Reah break down the short pitch (short and focused pitch) into simple steps, focusing on a) the main character, b) his motivation, c) the problem/stakes and d) closing the deal. The point is, in a very few words, you have to convince extremely busy agents/editors that your story is worth sacrificing their precious time. Usually, you only have one shot at this so you must do it right. 

Some practical tips?
  • Be brief: editors and agents are busy! Details can come later, like in a synopsis (a resume of the main ideas and themes of the story).
  • Stick to ideas that make your story unique: many stories are built on reheated ideas, which is fine, but what makes YOURS stand out?
  • Don’t get discouraged. It’s not easy to resume a novel into something as short as 25 words or so, so be patient and keep at it. With practice, it’ll get easier.

Even if you never plan on querying, knowing how to ‘break down’ your story into simple yet interesting terms can be helpful in other ways. After writing 60-100K of complex relationships, generational conflict, and numerous characters, trying to identify a story’s basic parts can be hard. Knowing how to think of your story in simpler terms can make the task of writing a synopsis (which you’ll need if an agent asks you to submit your book for consideration) and planning subsequent books, easier. Lastly, be kind to your friends and family. They love you, but ever wonder why the room suddenly goes quiet, even empties, when the subject of ‘the book’ comes up? Good luck!

About Dyane Forde

Dyane Forde
Dyane Forde’s love of writing began with an early interest in reading and of words in general. She was always amazed at how linking words together in different ways had unexpected and pleasing results on others. This sparked a life-long desire to write all types of things, from short stories, novels, flash fiction, poetry…every story or book represents new joys and challenges. Dyane views writing as an amazing and intimate communication tool, meaning that it becomes a means through which she seeks to connect with others on a level deeper than intellect.

For more information about Dyane and her writing projects, see the following links. Please write! She loves to hear from her readers.

Her writing blog: www.droppedpebbles.wordpress.com

Twitter @PurpleMorrow
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Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/user/show/11441024-dyane-forde
Tumblr: http://dyegirl.tumblr.com/
LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/profile/view?id=286343198

6 Comments
Yolanda Isabel Regueira Marin link
8/10/2013 11:09:03 pm

Great tips from Dyane Forde. Thank you for sharing this Scarlett. By the way I love Scarlett O'Hara, whilst a little spoilt she is a strong character and a survivor. :-)

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Scarlett Van Dijk
9/10/2013 12:43:19 am

Thanks for commenting Yolanda and yes they are great tips :)
I was named after Scarlett O'Hara and I'm proud of it :D

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Dyane link
10/10/2013 12:27:14 am

Thanks Yolanda. Hopefully they'll come in handy when you're shopping your book around. :)

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constance link
12/10/2013 09:07:57 pm

Great advice, Dyane. I have the hardest time keeping my pitches brief, but I've heard practice makes perfect. So I'm off to practice.

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Dyane link
15/10/2013 11:04:16 pm

Good luck!

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Teagan Kearney link
12/10/2013 10:50:51 pm

Thanks, Scarlett, for hosting Dyane's concise and informative post.

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